First of all, in dictionary, fashion is defined
"something that is popular or thought to be good at a particular
time." But many people generally perceive it as clothing and define it
"wearing what fits them". Actually, it is highly acceptable, because
one can choose what to wear or how to combine their clothes. In my opinion,
there must not be a common decision about fashion. In addition,fashion in all
things are constantly changing and it is not limited to clothing. Different
kinds of games and amusements, styles of furniture, foods and drinks may come
into fashion and go out of fashion. For example; once upon a time
"MARIO" was really popular among the young. But now more
sophisticated games are in demand. Additionally, some expressions may be
accepted out of fashion and they are no more used. This may be because of
religious,cultural or social factors.We can observe many examples of it in
clothing,amusement,technology at any time.
First of all, in dictionary, fashion is defined "something that is popular or thought to be good at a particular time. (missing article)
YanıtlaSilIn my opinion, there must not be a common decision about fashion. (word choice-“should” is better for me)
fashion in all things are constantly changing and it is not limited to clothing. (verb)
Dear Demet,
I really enjoyed reading your journal. You have explained everything clearly and fluently. Besides, you have used different synonyms. That’s why I liked It very much. But you have some grammar mistakes. If you revise your journal and correct your mistakes, your journal will become perfect. In addition, you don’t have any spelling and punctuation mistakes. That’s a very important thing for me. Hence, I’m looking forward to reading your other journals.